Cornilious 2010-04-17 15:26:24

The place where your cursor is is awkward and sometimes I can't tell which part I hit when I failed.
Also, don't make the person go all the way back to the title screen.

Tagger54 2010-04-20 19:13:24

Well, this is pretty much the same as any other mouse avoider game out there, just a little less detailed and complex. Your hitTests need work and finishing each level should be done by contacting something rather than clicking something. When you die, you need to go back to either the previous level or the beginning of the current level, people will freak out when they start over for the 3rd time. the avoiding red dots seem very tedious and should be made into some sort of animated obstacle, or at least use your own coding to make them more original. some of the backgrounds were nice but seemed to be drawn with a mouse, which is not good, unless you are VERY comfortable with one.
the menu text on the back button seemed to be dynamic which made the button nearly impossible to click and the text often just disappeared. when giving a direction always use comp text (something you typed out) so its legible and readable.

intoscreen 2010-04-21 00:00:22

Thanks for the input I tried to change a few things, let me know what else I can do to it.

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intoscreen 2010-04-21 00:02:36

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Tagger54 2010-04-21 00:32:25

The cherry is ok, but it needs to not pulsate, and the font in the instructions menu needs to change, The text on the Back button is still dynamic, it needs to be changed to static, and you still go back to level 1 when you die, not much has changed at all.

intoscreen 2010-04-22 23:30:46

This here's some more stuff.

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Tagger54 2010-04-23 17:54:58

Im not seeing any change, my biggest problem is still going back to the beginning when you die, I got the the first black level and figured when I died I would go back to the beginning of it so I can try again with what I learned about the invisible level, but I had restart and by the second time I tried Iw as totally turned off.